学习总结怎么写(总结怎么写模板)满满干货
不来虚的,只讲干货。
不来虚的,只讲干货本期带来文书系列之“如何写好总结”~我们始终相信一个精彩的文书总结部分像是舞台剧的Ending,让人回味无穷像是神奇的童话世界,让人想要仔细观摩欣赏更像是一部制作精良的电影,让人反复观看,叹为观止。
在留学申请中,除了学校、专业、GPA、语言成绩等硬性条件外,PS(Personal Statement)可以说是重中之重它不仅是学校在主观上进一步了解你的第一道窗口,也是你如何从众多申请者中脱颖而出的致胜法宝。
一份好的文书,不仅能让面试官觉得你是一个逻辑思维严谨,更是一个对自己有深刻认识和思考的人,这种文书也会一定程度上,亦或是弥补你其他硬性条件的不足,亦或是让你的申请材料锦上添花~那么该如何呈现一封精彩的文书?转轴酱将在
文书写作系列为你介绍一些文书写作tips,干货满满,快点赞、关注,并转发,第一时间获取文书系列的更新吧~
上期分享了如何写文书的总结提炼应该怎么写?也展现总结提炼不同的写法以及作用,戳下文可回顾~干货时间 | 文书写作系列(七):如何写好文书总结部分(上)本期继续~Vol.7 / 总结篇 · 下总结的字面意思:分析事件得出结论。
而说到提炼,则是去粗取精,对全文进行拔高升华提炼总结就像乐曲的结尾,乐声已止,但余音绕梁它既可能是一个总结句,出现在某一段的结尾;也可能是一个总阶段,虽然精炼但有扣住关键词的收束全文的作用本篇我们着重讲述如何写好文书的提炼总结,写申请文书,切忌虎头蛇尾,一起来学习下吧~。
一些 Insights提炼总结目的是为了增强分论点的力量,再度呈现最核心重要内容,给人留下深刻印象如果分论点是关于核心竞争力,那么提炼总结中要根据本段所提及事例,总结下本段想突出表现的品质是什么,是领导力?团队合作?创造力?进取心、坚持不懈?还是踏实勤恳?。
如果分论点是关于自己的专业兴趣和认识的,那么提炼总结中要提到自己对专业的浓厚兴趣、深刻认识、独到思考以及对行业未来的期望,自身的成长锻炼,高屋建瓴,又简明扼要所以,在每一个具体段落中,也要首尾呼应,逻辑严谨。
衡量标准第一档:紧扣段落论点,总结充分,提炼有高度,再次突出中心,锦上添花第二档:对该段内容进行了象征性总结,没有提炼和升华,或者总结大而空第三档:提炼或总结缺失,有头无尾具体方法提炼总结的具体方法:诸如:加入新的思考,总结细节展现的品质,展望下一步的发展,等等。
在总结提炼的过程中,不仅需要“回顾”总结所提及论点事例,也需要展现分析升华的能力好的提炼需要对所写事情本身认识深刻,也需要灵感先写下一稿,慢慢修正,反复琢磨总结提炼的位置: 放在事情叙述之后,一般在段尾,段中较为少见。
可以与段首起到呼应作用,使整段更加流畅完整、逻辑结构也更加严谨范例展示· 提炼总结和职业/专业相结合Apart from commercial experience, I was also diverse and active in public activities. In university, English major’s daily presentation and group projects during undergraduate study and tutoring experience enhanced my public speaking skills. I was chosen as a representative of Chinese undergraduates to address lectures during my study exchange in American university. As a member of student union, dancing association and piano association, a founder of billiard& snooker association, I was both an organizer and a participant in various university activities.
Outside university, I did part-time jobs in the entertainment industry, including fashion model for clothing firms and photography studios, actress for TV series and host for ceremonies.
Participation in public activities improved my language and self-expression ability, which are important skills for a good manager.
· 升华总结也可以放在文章中间,紧跟在事件描述之后At Purdue, my research experience with Professor Hukam C. Mongia and Assistant Professor Jun Chen helped me gain a deeper understanding about fluid performance, modeling, and operating an experiment. In our research, we are trying to improve the CFD simulation for a turbine combustion mixer. During our research, I did design works for an experiment tool, using Matlab and Fluent software for comparison and modeling. I also assisted with laser path designing and PIV system assembly and adjustment.
The most important fact I learned through the research was the virtue of cooperation. Today, nobody can finish the whole process by him or herself. That makes cooperation and team work much more important.
The experiment for Reynolds Number at thousand level has been finished. Some differences between experiment and simulation around end wall and entrance regions have been found. The increased budget provided us a more powerful pump, and it is on its way to our lab. We are rebuilding the system for Reynolds Number at ten thousand level. Our research is still going on, and according to the results, a paper can be expected by next semester.
· 全文总结:全文总结内容上要高度凝练,语言上或言简意赅,总结全文;或升华,谈出你的心声和诚意I am not just a dreamer. I put my thoughts into actions, and now I have well prepared myself for Stanford University. I believe my strong science background, experimental skills, and personal qualities make me perfect candidate for the program. The path ahead is full of hardship, but my passion for this discipline would lead me to success.。
总结 从以上的例子不难看出,总结提炼不一定每一个段落都要有,也不一定要每一篇文书都来一个专门的结尾段主要看是否的确有在结尾想再次强调、或者升华的部分要将总结段落运用的合理有效提炼总结不需要长篇大论,有时。
一两句话就好,但是要起到段落点睛的作用,服务主旨,给人留下深刻印象同时,总结提炼还可以体现逻辑上的递进关系,从兴趣的激发,到大专业方向的确定,再到具体方向的阐述,直至最后为何想要继续深造的原因,给读者展现了一个。
清晰的故事线文书总结的两个反例· 总结和提炼皆缺失Besides the consistent research in the academic area, I began my first international law practice in April。
[YEAR]. To attract more young students focusing on the common welfare of human beings and world peace, I, together with 4 friends, initiated the establishment of an International
[ORGANIZATION NAME]Student Network. Due to the non-profit status of our network, we encountered desperate financial situation that we even didn’t have any single penny to pay for the posters. Strongly determined, I mobilized my fellow students to embark on a fund-raising campaign ranging from selling second-hand books to ask for help from foreign diplomatic agencies in
[LOCATION], and even personally called more than 30 law firms, one after another, for sponsorship. Finally we succeeded in raising RMB 2000. With this small amount of money, we organized and held a forum “
[FORUM NAME]”, for which we successfully invited [NAME], a Legal Advisor at [ ], and Judge [ ] from [ ] to deliver speeches on the trials and operations of their respective courts to nearly 500 students in [ ].
✍点评:除却上文中提到的时间、地点和活动名称的缺失,该段也缺乏对所参加活动的总结、思考和提升总结句可以这样写:“Through the speech and the following discussion, I became aware of the obstacles existing in the path toward justice and peace in international society and I was deeply moved by their persistent efforts in their dreams: the achievement of the universal values of human rights and human dignity.”。
· 缺乏细节,显得假大空With these abilities and efforts in academy, I was facilitated with more competence, which made me stand out in rounds of interviews and successfully gain an internship in Dowin Investment Management Co. Ltd this summer. My primary responsibility …
After the internship, I developed my own opinion and broadened my horizon towards working in the financial industry.
✍点评:这里的个人心得还是有些general and vague, 有了理解,但是没有详细说是什么理解有了观点,扩大视野,那么到底是什么样的观点,什么样的视野?如果可以再详细说明就更好了至此,文书写作系列基本就结束啦,我们分享了从最开始的如何写开头、如何写细节部分、到现在的如何写结尾,聪明的同学相信你自己已经心中有一定的写作框架啦,。
好的文书,不仅仅是对自己过往经历的描述,需要更加严谨的结构和清晰的表达~
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