学习英语的建议英语作文(怎么学好英语作文)一篇读懂

对此说明两点如下:1. 内容需改进之处，例如:把“I hope Chinese government and citizens join in

文/刘宝彩本文包括四部分：一、优秀英语作文成文；二、与优秀文对比文；三、总结两种文优缺点；四、英文写作已知条件一、优秀英语作文成文：Dear editor， I LI Hua as one of readers write you a letter sending you a article on such a “how to understand Chinese-tradition culture” topic as you asked for their comment. So greatly does it turn people favorable for protecting a variety of Chinese culture that a reader I will be one of its inheritors generation by generation. This viewpoint I would make known to you as well as all-China people. By that I am benefiting a lot, in the belief that they shall work hard at doing everything they could, in making China great again throughout a little more than 5000-year history and helping China grow stronger days to come in future.

As shown by this, people are expected to join a highly-cultured activity in protecting traditional culture of China to develop culturally or mentally or intellectually.

Yours, Li Hua二、与优秀文对比文：Dear editor，Im writing to you to talk about my opinions about traditional Chinese culture. I think its necessary for us to protect and inherit it. Here are some reasons. Firstly, as one of the ancient civilizations in the world, the traditional Chinese culture is the foundation of the development of our country, and it can provide spiritual motivation for Chinese economy. Secondly, it includes many inspiring and shocking events, through which we can learn some useful things to make our country develop more quickly. Last but not least, it is an important part of Chinese history, and inheriting it may make us stronger and benefit our growth. I hope Chinese government and citizens join in the campaign of protecting and inheriting traditional Chinese culture. We should make contributions and efforts to carry it forward.

Yours, Li Hua三、总结两种文优缺点（一）英语优秀文：写作内容精细、逻辑思路清晰，相互组合佳；避“跳跃式”思维出现，免缺因少果；写作过程科学、规范，英文结构完整，审题精准不漏，观点论据跑不走，逻辑过渡也不丢。

（二）与优秀文对比文：似乎有“面熟”感觉，这样有“千人一面孔”的特点，如，firstly, secondly, Last but not least.....等；有的句子内容需要改进以及有的句子之间没有逻辑关联。

对此说明两点如下：1. 内容需改进之处，例如：把“I hope Chinese government and citizens join in the campaign of protecting and inheriting traditional Chinese culture. We should make contributions and efforts to carry it forward.（我希望中国政府和市民加入保护和继承传统中国文化运动中来。

为推进运动我们作出贡献和努力）”，应改进为“我希望在中国政府领导下请市民加入保护和继承传统中国文化运动中来（Citizens would be asked to join in the campaign to protect and inherit traditionally Chinese culture under the leadership of Chinese government, I hope）”。

2. 英文句子之间由于词法失误而导致逻辑关联性失误，因此应把：We should make contributions and efforts to carry it forward.改为We should make a contribution to and an effort on the above campaign to carry forward.

（三）大家通过对比两篇英语作文，细细品味以让学生知道如何写出优秀英语作文，达到——提升学生写作英语能力及其分数 四、英文写作已知条件假定你是李华最近China Daily就“如何看待中国传统文化”面向社会征稿。

请你用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你自己的想法要点如下： （1）表明自己的立场（传统文化应该得到保护和传承）；（2）给出你的理由；（3）呼吁社会共同参与注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：传承 inherit